Friday, June 22, 2012

Welcome Queen of the Elements -- Terri Talley Venters

Please help me welcome, Terri Talley Venters

Terri Talley Venters,
Author of Carbon Copy

Terri received her Bachelor’s degree in Accounting and Master’s degree in Taxation from the University of Florida. She is a licensed CPA and a Second Degree Black Belt in Taekwondo. She lives in St. Augustine, Florida, with her husband, Garrison, and their two sons.
Carbon Copy is the 1st thrilling novel in the Elements of Mystery Series. The title of each novel will contain an element from the Periodic Table of Elements. Terri recently finished writing Tin Roof, the sequel to Carbon Copy, coming soon from Wild Child Publishing.  
And Terri’s romantic/suspense novel, Body of Gold, is coming soon from Freya’s Bower. For more about Terri’s upcoming releases, please visit her website
On the first of each month, Terri also posts free short stories on her blog. Follow her at she weaves her way through the Periodic Table of Elements.  

Now for another treat, a free story by Terri (and it's true):

By: Terri Talley Venters
Luke kicked off his flip-flops and wiggled his toes in the hot sands of Playalinda Beach. Holding his brand-new Billabong surfboard, his sky-blue eyes scanned the glassy waves pounding the purity of the shores at his favorite place to surf. Playalinda Beach, part of Canaveral National Seashore, remained unblemished from any commercial development which tarnished most of Florida’s beaches.

He inhaled the salty scent of the ocean as the mist of the crashing waves lightly sprayed his face. He tossed his head to the side to remove his overgrown, sun-streaked, blonde hair from his eyes. He examined the waves, smiling at their four-to-five foot peaks as he contemplated the optimal place to put in his six-foot surfboard.

Turning to the left, he looked north towards New Smyrna Beach, the shark-bite capital of the world. Luke enjoyed the view of nothing but waves, sand, and vegetated dunes diminishing in the horizon. He turned to the right to a view just as beautiful, plus one Space Shuttle nestled against Launch Complex 39A off in the distance at Kennedy Space Center.

After deciding to start slightly north of his current location, he speared the tip of his surfboard into the sand, allowing it to stand upright. He slowly removed his Def Leppard T-shirt from his tanned, muscular upper body and threw it on the sand along with his towel. He removed his car keys from his Lightning Bolt board shorts and wished he had a girlfriend to tote all of his crap.

He opened his small canister of Zinc Oxide and dipped two fingers into the thick, cold goop. He rubbed the white sun-protection on his nose without a thought about protecting the rest if his body from the harmful rays of the sun. He grabbed his wax and slowly rubbed it on his surfboard. Luke inhaled the coconut aroma as he meticulously covered the areas where he’d soon plant his feet to ride the waves.

He grabbed the leash connected to the surfboard and secured the velcro strap around his left ankle. He pulled his surf board out of the sand, tucking it under his arm as he walked north about fifty-yards. He trekked through the sinking sand of the shoreline and tossed his board flat into the water. After guiding his floating board until the water reached his thighs, Luke lay his torso on the board and paddled through the glassy waves.

The water temperature felt perfect, warm enough to avoid the hassle of his wetsuit, yet refreshing enough to invigorate him. His arms stroked through the water as he paddled towards the open Atlantic Ocean. As the remains of a crashed wave rolled towards him, he automatically submerged the tip of his board into the water while simultaneously lifting his powerful upper body to allow the wave to flow between him and his board.

Luke paddled past the waves and sat up on his board. His legs dangled in the water as he admired the unusual clearness of the salt-water. He watched the bait fish swim briskly below him and almost wished he couldn’t see the bottom of the ocean floor. He silently debated if he wanted to see what swam in the waters beneath him; sometimes ignorance is bliss.

He regretted watching Shark Week on the Discovery channel the night before. He wished he’d never learned the close proximity of sharks to the shores of Florida’s beaches, or how sharks often confused the dangling limbs of surfers on their boards with edible seals. Luke couldn’t risk the ridicule of his friends calling him a pussy because he felt afraid to go into the water, so he sucked up his fears and said a silent prayer.

A rush of excitement filled his lungs as he saw a perfect wave rise towards him. He rotated his board to face the beach and dipped his arms into the water to paddle towards shore. He felt the wave lift him and the board up as the force propelled him forward. Luke placed his hands on the board and his strong forearms quickly pushed up as his feet automatically planted themselves on the rear half of the board.

Luke kept his knees bent as he squatted on the board. Using his hips, knees, and feet, he rotated the board back and forth as he rode the four-foot wave perpendicular to the shoreline. With the wave tunneling behind him, he rotated the board up, attempting to catch air. He felt the board coming out of the water and rotated the board back down onto the wave. He wiped out face first into the wave, swallowing salt water as the board leash yanked him towards the shore.

Praying nobody he knew witnessed his wipeout, he stood on the ocean floor in waist deep water until his bearings returned and his head stopped spinning. His ankle throbbed with pain as he recalled the fin of his board scraped him during the wipeout. He lifted his injured limb out of the water and examined the small amount of blood oozing out of the scrape.
Something swooshed near his legs, and Luke prayed the cause was merely the swirling current from the recently crashed wave. He hopped back up on the board and paddled out beyond the breaking point of the waves. He sat on his board, letting his feet dangle in the water below.

Luke saw the shark fin about twenty yards out, swimming perpendicular to the shore. He gently lifted his dangling legs out of the water, cursing for not remembering something so simple as blood attracts sharks. He lay on his floating board with all of his appendages safely out of the water, praying for the recognizable bull shark fin to pass by.

In an instant, the fin turned towards the shore, heading straight for him. Oh shit! Luke paddled frantically, scared to have his arms in the water, but more scared to risk floating on a surfboard as a shark swam towards him. As he paddled faster than he ever thought humanly possible, he heard the screams of sunbathers watching in horror from the shore.

Luke never looked back to gauge the shark’s location, he just kept paddling. He felt a strong force lift him up as his board and body rose. He knew the feeling all too well. He’d just caught a wave. Squatting up on the board, he rode the wave all the way to the shore. When the board fins dragged the bottom of the shallow waters, Luke hopped off of the board and onto the safety of the sandy beach, never looking back.

Author’s Note. Zinc is based on a true story about my brother. Our mother never knew about this until she read ZINC.

On to her new release: 

Available June 19, 2012 from

Carbon Copy

By: Terri Talley Venters

Lilly Allen has brains, beauty, and a trust fund. She's living in New York City and her career as a reporter is taking off. She's hoping the love of her life, Grier, will propose soon. She has it all, or so she thinks.

Grier Garrison, Create Life executive, is running the company while his father, Dr. Michael Garrison, is in the ICU awaiting a heart transplant. Grier knows the truth about Create Life and its shady side business. He fears Lilly and her twin brother, Luke, are in danger.

While working on two unrelated stories, stolen newborns and cloning, Lilly discovers a shocking connection. Horrific things are happening, but who is behind it all?


April Davis said...

Loved your story. Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck with the new book.

Terri Talley Venters said...

"Queen of the Elements" I love it =) Thanks for having me today. I imagine fewer people will want to swim in the ocean after reading Zinc!

Terri Talley Venters said...

Thanks April! My mother didn't know this happened to my brother until she read ZINC! Glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for stopping by =)

Rose Reader said...

Carbon Copy sounds great and enjoyed the free story. Like your writing style.

Cassie Exline said...

Long live the Queen. Lovely having you here, Terri ;)

Cassie Exline said...

April and Rose thanks for stopping by.

Terri Talley Venters said...

I'm loving the Queen of the Elements title. Hope I have a long reign. Glad you enjoyed my story Rose.

This morning, when I told my father how mom never knew her son, my brother, was chased by a shark until she read ZINC about a year ago. My father asked, "My son was chased by a shark?" oops.

Cassie Exline said...

Now that's funny, Queen Terri. Neither parent knew! Hope your brother wasn't upset with you.

Cherie Reich said...

That is scary! Glad your brother was okay.

Congrats on your book release, Terri!

Terri Talley Venters said...

My brother doesn't know! Lol.

Terri Talley Venters said...

He got back in the water the very next day! Still surfs at 40. Thanks for stopping by Cherie, now I'm hopping back on your blog=)

Cassie Exline said...

Oh my the brother doesn't know, long live the Queen!

Cassie Exline said...

So glad you stopped by, Cherie.

Amy Shipp said...

Heard there was royalty visiting from the Land of Elements. LOL Loved your story, Terri. Carbon Copy is on my wish list.

Cassie Exline said...

Hey there, Amy, didn't see you slip in. Glad you made it though.

Terri Talley Venters said...

Nice to meet you Amy. Glad you enjoyed my story. Hope you enjoy Carbon Copy! Cassie is certainly giving me the royal treatment. I feel like a queen. Great to have so many comments=)

Terri Talley Venters said...

I told my husband how much I loved the title, "Queen of the Elements." and he's already trying to buy me the domain name, but he's addicted to domain names =)

Cassie Exline said...

Here's to his success, your majesty! You're more than welcome to return to visit any time with your most loyal subject and her court.

Terri Talley Venters said...

Loved all of the description and surfer's lingo in "Zinc." You must have quizzed your brother for all of that info! Glad I didn't know at the time about the shark. What ELSE don't Dad and I know? On second thought, I'd rather not.
(Leslie Talley, author of Make Old Bones

Cassie Exline said...

Thanks for stopping by, Leslie or should I call you Queen Mother? Queen Terri's story Zinc was excellent.